You have made a great job of describing your room and I liked honesty with regards to your (constantly) unmade bed. the spelling was great and I really enjoyed reading the of writing you worked on. I my room there is lots of colours all around it. Then, you can say your home is a zoo (or a swamp or a classroom, or whatever!) Because most people feel most at ease at home, then you can make this comparison to show youre the opposite of them. My bedroom is special to me because it's where I can go to get alone time and just relax it's pretty smelly but it's a cozy warm layout that is just for me. Secondly the lighting, at four oclock my room is almost pitch black and its so damp and cold. The view outside my window is not the best. On one side is a three section wardrobe with most of my craft supplies in it. You've likely heard many primary metaphors throughout the course of your life and studies. Jackson enjoys sharing a room with you. I suck creamy cock. This is where I do my homework. My bed layout is in the corner of the room with a bit of space in the middle of the room. Georges Bedroom Solfeggio 852 Hz, Well done 4, She has described everything in detail of what she has in her room. You might say my bedroom is a mess but to be honest this is as tidy as you will get it. Some of the punctuation was a little muddled some of the I's were not where they needed to be and in between the full stops and the next sentence there were no spaces. Inspirational messages can be viewed on plaques, saying things such as dream, see beauty in everything, or friends are the family we choose for ourselves. The word believe is arched across the door to my wardrobe. Another piece of furniture I haven't yet mentioned is my bookshelf. All Rights Reserved. I also have my Xbox which is of the things I play when Im not doing anything. Not quite how I see your room - it is a typical boys bedroom with a LOT of mess on the floor and you also forgot to say that you chuck stuff under your bed as well as the "random drawers"! Tropical, Sporty, Comfy, Tidy and Spacious. The final piece of furniture is a tall drawer set, which contains five drawers worth of clothing. My room doesnt smell that good. They are all my floor and desks. To call your home a dump is to say that its a complete mess! The mother has to handle all of these things, and is feeling like shes trying to coordinate a zebra, giraffe, and elephant, to all work in unison! We have a old square tv holder thingy that I used to swing on until I put a hole in the wall, its still there. In my room I have a book on my beside table that I am reading and I have books in my wardrobe that I have already read or need to be read. By Bridget Smith. I dont know if food plates count as accessories because if they do i have a lot of accessories. If you were to say that your office was your home, you would be saying that youre always at the office! I like the colours, the decorations, the flooring, the view of the farm and most of all my cosy bed. My bed. Look at the picture and make sentences to describe the bedroom. I liked your ideas, you thought of ideas then typed in down on your google doc. Jackson 2x4 Auto Darkening Lens, A metaphor for home explains your feelings about your home by using figurative language. Youd need to think of something your home reminds you of: a zoo, a swamp, a castle, or a zen retreat. Then, you can say your home is a zoo (or a swamp or a classroom, or whatever!) in order to create the perfect metaphor to describe your home. Your description is really good. As I creep through the messiness there begins a pile of lego pieces on the grey dull carpet waiting for someone to stand on it and be be pricked. The spelling was very good I struggled to find any mistakes. You would see all my clothes on my floor if you walked up stairs and all the undies on the floor could date back a month. 3-. I wouldnt mind a bigger bed, though! It is a square shape with a little rectangle that leads to the door. The mirror is directly in line with my bed so it was scary when I had just watched a horror movie about the urban legend Bloody Mary and had to go to sleep. Also I have bad eyesight so It Is really hard to see my tv from my bed. My Bedroom 3+, In your description there was quiet a few words spelled wrong, but your punctuation was pretty good, you have edited it pretty well but maybe just one more cheek. My room to me is the most warmest place in house which makes my room cozy and casual. That is exactly what it looks like. My carpet is dark brown and I have no rugs or anything other than my carpet on the floor. But the floor is not the messy thing in my room my wardrobe is, my wardrobe is where all the dirty clothes are that I can't be bothered to put away, when I have to tidy my room so I just put them in my wardrobe. In my room I have my school bags. As the sun beamed into my bedroom, one of my signs began to glisten and reflect the light that was coming through the window. Your ideas are relevant Alex, you have described what it looks well. Roman blinds with large, bold coloured birds of many forms. Continue useing very good punctuation and spelling. When you say your home is a swamp, you usually mean that its messy, dark, and maybe even a little smelly. I don't think you've left out a single thing about your room :), This sounds like the room I have been in there is lots of detail.The ending paragraph is great to end the description, This sounds very descriptive. Great writing. On my desk is my blue lamp, my pink polaroid camera and my mini drawers. This is placed flush against the left hand wall and is filled with many treasures. must suck cock. It had a lot of descriptive words in it. You spelt it as color (the American way). I can also take out anger when I am annoyed and I needed my drums to practice for my drum lessons. A strange smell like no other. The creamy brown carpet is pleasant. It was an excellent piece of writing. MY BEDROOM A metaphor for a bedroom could be, " His bedroom is like a sauna used is, " The bedroom is so messy, it looks like a war zone. Most times all you can hear is the clicking of my keyboard on either my ipod or laptop. At the end of the expedition we leave a wonderful place and head back into the real world. The final part of the room is the space, the space of the room is kinda small which is a good thing because that mean that I can do cool ping pong trick shots. Yeah I know I left it messy on monday but I promise you I cleaned it up as soon as I got home [wink wink]. The vocobulary is very good aswell. You might go to a spa retreat or meditation retreat to escape from the world and get some relaxation. NSL: be more bold with good words to catch the readers attention and to take them on a journey. There are so many aspects of my bed I love but my favorite one would have to how comfortable it is. I like the constant use of adjectives, it helps me visualise the colours. Cleanliness, my room is not what you call clean my clothes from school lying on my bed jerseys not been hung up because I'm to lazy, my bed all messed up because I never make it, but some things aren't all bad like the way I have set up stuff that makes it look really cool and neat. I spotted a few spelling and punctuation mistakes. The blankets on my bed are very colourful there is a bright red, white and grey striped blanket, a soft pink one and a plain white one. By my bed there is a book shelf on top it has a lamp and inside it has a variety of books, by the corner there is another book shelf and it has a green lava lamp on top and more books below. I like it because it has all my precious stuff. When my siblings come in they make a lot of noise so they get sent to their own room. Well, kind of - there isnt a set theme but there is a lot of stuff from the beach. The ideas are great and relevant to the topic. Good work a nice peace of writing. Next to my bed is a brown wooden three drawer bedside cabinet which has edges that have been chewed on by dogs. I think that the things in my room represent me and my interests. In my room and on my bedside table there are books like The Hunger Games, Harry Potter and the Cursed Child, and a Top Gear magazine the Harry Potter book is yellowy orange with wooden woven ball with a child inside on the front cover, the Top Gear magazine has a red Aston Martin DB 12 with a caption saying Cruise Missile, on my desk there is a yellow Ferrari model which I got when I was born. My room is small so it is easy to spot it's messiness. My carpet, I like my carpet Dont get me wrong I like the light creamy color that gets me comfy, I like the nice pillow feeling of it and how it eases me to sleep really quickly. The style of your room to me is a dark and bright theme with all the colours and design. Now you should have a pretty good idea of what my bedroom looks like. My black guitar leans up against my drawers and on top of my drawers there is an orange word that says Brave. MY BEDROOM My room has two windows, one facing south, the other west. The windows have a great view out them and have stripey grey and silver curtains. Also when you look down ot my window you can see the workshop and the shed. I did the wrong thing. My room isnt colourful. 3, Ha ha he was very honest about how messy his room is, it was an accurate description. Also I have light pink checked sheets. There is a big space in the middle of the room because of the positioning of the furniture. I believe this because my bright orange feature wall attracts the daylight sun and all of the furniture is either new or has had a splash of paint to make it look fresh. A metaphor is a literary device in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action in a way that is not possible in a literal sense. All of this talking about my room reminded me of something, I need to clean it or Ill get banned from the Xbox. There is no one there in your house who can tell you what to do (unless youre a kid then your parents are the king and queen of the castle!). Above my bed are two medium sized paintings, one of an owl and the other of a tree. Skateboards are propped up against the plain back wall next to my bed. well done, BRIDGETS BEDROOM But I like it because I can change the room around to the way I like it. Every room needs furniture to make it yours and in my room the most important piece of furniture is my bed. Third, the accessories, a lot of the accessories are gaming related like Pokemon and Call of Duty and theres my lighting module. I have some great accessories in my room that can give you a story about my personality. You described your bedroom very well, but I feel your punctuation let you down a bit. Somehow it is always warm with the right temperature. They are rather a good set and they cost a lot of money. I love the way in which you used senses, This is great. I really enjoy your description jake I can visualize your bedroom very well. oh lick that creamy cock, Below you will understand what is important, the idea provides one of the links with an exciting site: mercy smart square. I think it is awesome you describe things in you bedroom so well and I saw it so clear in my head. I do 'nag' at you to clean your room. The carpet a deep chocolate brown to complement a pure white set of draws. Style of the room is mine and only mine if anyone can match my unique style they all mash up together to make the bedroom mine. I have 3 words to describe my dutches brown, soft, wooden it has five drawers 2 side by side then 3 long ones below each other. I would give you a rubric 5. The layout of my medium-sized hideout is spacious, and being L shaped, it permits a reasonably large area to dance crazily around, spend quality time with friends or complete therapeutic craft activities. Overall I give you a 4. Overall I think my room is an amazing space and deserves a lot more love and cleaning to keep it in peak condition. The material on this site can not be reproduced, distributed, transmitted, cached or otherwise used, except with prior written permission of Multiply. Other than that good job. Good story I enjoyed reading it. My bedroom isn't that big so storage isn't easy for all of the clutter I have. I have this there because well I play games alot. So now you know about my room, I hope you can visualize it and my topics were the furniture, accessories, colors and the layout. 4. as bright as a day. you could add a bit more information. Flick Of The Wrist Meaning, Your email address will not be published. Dont sniff to much or else you will smell the dirty clothes on the floor. Earrings, jewelry, crafts and a whole bunch of other stuff piled on top of the dresser. Cleanliness is key for a happy mum. The view of my room is amazing because when I look out of my window I see my whole farm I can see our cows I can see our cowshed and the sun rise. Being next to it gives me a warm feeling. To say your home is a safety blanket is to relate it to the characteristics of safety blankets: they make you feel comforted, safe, and protected from the world. Awards are the next important thing that has to be hung up to admire the things I have done. By William Wightman 8WH. I love the furniture in my room it makes it feel as if I am in a dream. It is the largest bedroom in the house it is rectangular and has a built in wardrobe. These windows also include a door, that leads out into one of three gardens at my house. My favorite things in my room are the pink wallpaper, the cool view outside my window because there are lots of cool trees and my bed's really comfortable because it has a soft mattress, there is also a cool windowsill that you can sit on and look at those beautiful trees. I have a chair that is very sturdy but comfortable and a table which is birch with white markings and has a curve on the end. I like the incredible detail you've put into this text. So, you could imagine someone who has just put lights all over their house standing back, looking at it, and remarking: my home is now a Christmas tree!, Another time you might use this is if you drive up your driveway to your home and see that all the lights are on inside. But all of this is because the entire house is new, in fact it's not even finished!, although with all these bonuses I don't go into my bedroom that often. My miniature dog and cow sculptures sitting on my desk beginning to gather dust. It is strewn with piles of clothes and virtually impossible to walk through. What is self fun? I am going to take you on a virtual trip around my room. Great writing Shadyn really liked it, I still ant that ps4 of yours though! In my room I have lots of draws and places to put stuff but hardly use any of because most stuff is on the floor. Over all it was well done. It is filled with many happy memories, prayers, fights with myself and resolutions. It has a nice texture and tickles my fingers when I wipe it. My carpet is a kinda light blue with dark blue lines through it and I also have my rug which has a black background and white zig zag lines on it. Let me describe the 4 features of my bedroom to you. Secondly, the wall decorations. Consider the classic sayings "love is blind" and "patience is a virtue." When I left my room I had my pajamas on the floor with my beanbag in the middle of the room. But one particular sport the theme is based on is Basketball. My PS4 is tall and black with a blue light going across it and it has a futuristic look to it. Its a good description of your room but could be a little bit better because of the spelling grammer. On the other side of my bed there is a desk which is blue and has glass as its main part. I almost feel bad for the things that have slided down the back and not found until the layout of my room changes. Quite an old room perhaps. A few more sensory descriptions of your room maybe but we would happily rate you 4+. I have my normal bag that I take to school everyday, my blue PE bag, my purple ski/sport bag and my old orange school bag. The other side of the room has my single bed crammed in the corner by the door. There is smelly rugby gear, warm ski gear and dirty clothes all over the floor. A metaphor is a word or phrase that is used to make a comparison between two things. With blue sheets on it and a big pink and blue duvet. I have heaps of ski gear but I dont really have anywhere to put it so even if I do clean my room, my ski gear normally stays on the floor. My duvet is light blue with spots that are light pink, dark pink, turquoise and white.My bed is a king single and I find that it is a very convenient size. Well in my room I don't have that much furniture but I am going to tell you what I do have. A metaphor is a figure of speech that describes an object or action in a way that Can't see any spelling errors good job . Metaphor Examples for Intermediate Readers The slashes indicate line breaks. Thorntons Bedroom Description My bed is the main accessory in my room because it is in the center of the room up against my feature wall. Now for all of the accessories in my room. The primary metaphor is the most basic of metaphors. Yes it can be very messy and there are times I cannot stand that mess any more so I tidy it. 2. as far apart as the poles. Well done Emma I could really picture your bedroom well use of spelling and I like the words you have used. Warmth of a Smile (Simile) Jack likes listening to different stories of his Grandma, and when he speaks with her, Jack notices that lines around her mouth are like sun rays. This comparison illuminates the fact that his Grandma is a good-natured and kind person whose kindness warms like sun rays. I hop into my cosy bed. I have a small sized mat black H stuck to my wall with a pattern of turquoise and white dots and black and white dot bunting underneath. The walls of my room are not too interesting at the moment, as they are covered in a bright white wall paper sealer ready for my new paint colours of white and teal blue. The pots I put my plants in are made out of clay and my photo frames are made out of glass. It gives a very accurate picture of Sophie's room. But there are disadvantages to having a small room. For example, a child who loves to be out playing on the streets but needs to be indoors by 5pm might come home and say: Its a prison in here! The place that I hang out in, do homework and well of course, sleep. I'm impressed with your vocabulary and spelling. Maybe next time don't use 'my' too much. I like the description. With the pastel colours and gold coloured curtains, it gives the room a lot of light. Next your eyes will settle upon my short and skinny box shelf that is as black as the night with draws both as blue as the sea and as green as the algae the resides in it. I am happy that Thomas likes his room, airy and small and keeps it tidy. I like black and white because it doesn't make the room feel too bright and the way it is placed and I like it that way. I have two windows in my room one facing straight ahead of you as you walk in and the other one above the bed. As you walk up the old skinny hallway, at the end, opposite the bathroom, you will find a bedroom,which you'd agreed looks like a bomb has gone off and spread all the junk everywhere, and yes its my bedroom, possibly the messiest in the house. With its concrete floor and the temporary plywood walls. Also my carpet is brown. Soft grey carpet pushing through my feet. My room does not have a lot of furniture in it but the favorite part of my room does and that is my desk it has two skinny shelves next to it. The layout and space in my room is the most important thing in my room to me. So over all the 4 main things that i love about my room are style , layout ,accessories and furniture. My most favorite piece of furniture in my room is most definitely my bed because its where I spend most of my time and when you spend time with something like that for that long you're sure to end up getting attached to it, but anyway my bed is my favorite thing in my room because its warm when I want warm and cool when I want cool and plus its majorly comfy. I like the vocabulary you used to describe your story like vibrant, large, silk, chilled. Ruebens bedroom You could make some ideas paragraphs a bit longer. Time for the most exciting part of it, the bed. There might even be a ball stuck between the TV and wall. I think my bedroom is perfect my way because of the colors, layout and the design. Good descriptive words & keen to help you clean & rearrange anytime. Probably you will see my bed first it's right under my window right in the center in my room. Excellent punctuation and spelling. In the summer it reaches a boiling point the duvets on the bed gets thinner and thinner and it gets harder to catch some sleep. My favourite was the accessories it was funny. I have heaps of pictures in my room, on my wall I have a picture of a duck (which I took) and in my wardrobe there are pictures of my dog, family and friends. My bedroom has 4 walls and in one large window on the south-west side. 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